Friday 29 August 2014
Today we went to the hall for a special show which we had to pay for the show for us to arrive. But all the small children went first in the morning we had to go at 11 clock straight away after morning tea when we arrived There was music going on first there was Pinocchio Then the story was about a got talent of acts then Simon the cow votes for Rapunzel but then Simon gets mean and locks Rapunzel in a tower and steals her voice but then she sees a prince which likes to rap then the prince sees Rapunzel in the tower and climbs up Rapunzel hair then they see Simon coming so then the prince climbs out and hides after that the beanstalk grows so then Rapunzel Climbs down the beanstalk and gets out but when her sister is going to win and trying to be Rapunzel so then Rapunzel stops the music and proves it that she is the real Rapunzel by raping.
I liked the funny bits and how they created lots of raps and included us in some bits like the raping
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ReplyDeleteGreat job Yuji, just one thing you can work on is maybe when you have done something you were writing maybe add some color to your writing, great work :-)